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Our First Book Review from P.T Butler, Reviewer-at-large

CementvilleOn Cementville by Paulette Livers

A Review by P.T. Butler

Paulette Livers’s novel Cementville (Counterpoint Press, 2014) centers upon a small Kentucky town grappling with the changes forced upon it during the Vietnam War. Eight of the town’s young men are brought back in boxes and two others come back wounded mentally, if not physically. It seems nearly the entire town is affected in one way or the other and to make matters more difficult, three murders occur within a short period of time.

Livers does a lot of things very right in this novel, not surprising as it is on the long list for the 2014 Flaherty-Dunnan First Novel Prize. There are many extraordinary sentences: “The last of the sun washed a ribbon of gold over the ridge across the valley.” Her descriptions of setting are vivid and sensuous. Her characters are well-drawn and interesting. There is fifteen-year-old Maureen, a memoirist and younger sibling to Billy, one of the two returned and struggling vets. Maureen’s Uncle Carl, recently released from a mental hospital after fifteen years; Wanda, once Carl’s love interest, a shy yet compassionate woman who still lives with her mother and is set to inherit a fortune. From the time that Livers takes us inside one of her characters, we are mostly drawn in and fully-absorbed by this world Livers creates so well.

But the problem with Cementville is that there are too many characters to keep track of and to get to know. The entire time I kept wishing for a character chart that I could refer to as the novel slips from one POV to another and through so many, even the town has a voice. The novel reads like an interconnected set of stories in the vein of Jennifer Egan’s A Visit from the Goon Squad or Elizabeth Strout’s Olive Kitteridge. The difference being that in Egan’s and Strout’s books I had no difficulty keeping up with who was who and how they interconnected.

In Cementville we don’t spend enough time with any single one character or family to become emotionally attached enough to care when they are murdered or commit suicide, and this felt like a terrible disappointment to me. I wanted to care about all of these people, but found myself only engaged with a few of them. I kept wondering how the novel would have played out if Maureen had told the entire story. I think I would’ve preferred that.  At the least, I think I needed the novel to speak in the voices of a handful of people, rather than a baker’s dozen or so.

But, let’s get back to the premise of the novel, the opening scenes of the story: seven National Guardsmen all killed in one night in Vietnam and all from Cementville. And this is exactly my criticism- let’s get back to this, because the novel never does. Livers never gives us the story of those seven men, except in a footnote in the afterword. It seems to not even matter to the plot of the novel, since the novel focuses upon the return of the POWs, Carl, Billy and another young man, Byard (whose been hiding in Canada). The poignant return of these people into their community is muddied, I think, with the rash of murders and the solving of these murders. It all felt very disconnected to me. What kind of story am I reading? A mystery? A novel that addresses the harsh reality of life after the war for our men who served? Or a novel like Louise Erdrich’s masterful Love Medicine in which we come to understand how families interconnect much like the spokes of a wheel? What drives the wheel of Cementville and the intermarried, interrelated families that live there? I’m not really sure.

I finished the book not really sure what some of the story had to do with the rest of the novel and I didn’t like that. I don’t need things wrapped up or all tied in a bow, but I need the elements of a novel to matter to the essence of the story. And I still cannot pinpoint the essence of Cementville and that leaves me hanging. That is an uncomfortable feeling, despite the poetic prose which I greatly admired.

It’s a Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad World

I had this dream the other day that, in the face of dire and wide-spread gas shortages, a man somewhere in the midwest began artificially breeding millions of electric eels, which he then used — after much initial skepticism and resistance — to power our machines. The first words of his triumphant Nobel Prize acceptance speech, the last words I heard before waking up: “They all thought I was mad…”

Tiny Librarians

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It’s a strange feeling when we try to remember something we know is in our heads but can’t quite seem to find. How do we know it’s even there? And since we — the conscious we — don’t know how we know it’s there, what part of ourselves does? There are tiny librarians running around inside our heads, apparently, climbing ladders and searching dusty shelves, finding words that unmask who we are.

On Daily Knitting

imagesI, probably like most people reading this, constantly long for more time to write. Each day starts with a new decision about less whining and more writing! However, if it’s true that reading is the better part of writing then I’ve hit the jackpot with The Tishman Review; a place where the best of inspiration, words, and images come together—a place that continually renews my desire to return to the writing.

A Bit of History

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I was born in Detroit, Michigan to a beautiful mother who taught me to love books and art and to a handsome father who taught me to love making things that endure and bring enjoyment to others. I have wanted to be a writer since I read Charlotte’s Web when I was six years old. Life took me in another direction and I ended up as a social worker in a correctional facility for substance abusers. After I became a hippie mother to two delightful boys and a gorgeous girl, I stayed home and grew vegetables, baked bread, sewed clothes and taught my children. During all of this, I was the office end of my husband’s landscape installation/snow removal company. On the morning I woke up and found myself to be thirty-five, I decided I did not want to kick the bucket without seeing if I could, one day, become a writer. It has been hard work and some of the years, life did not let me write. When the economic crash destroyed our business and I became unemployed, I decided to go to MFA land and just do it. There’s not much else (other than my loved ones and my misfit pets) that makes me as happy as reading or writing a good story. Send me your story. I am waiting to love it.

Why

He was a large man, lumbering and imperious, with a hawk-like nose and light blue eyes that darted here and there so often, that I do not recall ever looking him in the eye.  Of course, me being a child, I never would have.  He was my grandfather and of the era that children should be seen and not heard.  When he came to visit he would announce his arrival with a whistle, a who-whooo, who-whooo, much like the call of a mourning dove, and would always come bearing gifts.BookPic

On this occasion the gift he carried was a book in honor of my ninth birthday. Like the man himself, it was a heavy tome, almost unmanageable for me with its weight, its onion skin paper, its fine print.  In his barrelling voice my grandfather asked me if I had ever heard of O’Henry.  I had not.  He touched the side of his nose and told me I should then get acquainted.  And, like it was a homework assignment given to me by a teacher I longed to impress, I took the book upstairs to my bedroom and read it cover to cover.

I think we as writers each have a moment like this when we knew we were destined for the world of words; some minute or second that, for each of us, is The Moment. I don’t know what it was about The Collected Stories of O’Henry that got me writing poetry, but I do remember the first feel of that book in my hands, the soft burgundy of the cover, the fear that I’d tear a page if I turned it too anxiously, too quickly, without reverence, as if the book would know.